Do you see dead people?

Very impressive! With only one observation: The spirits of killed warriors live IN the trees, not among them. Each old tree has the soul of a killed in battle brave, and all of them, gathered together, they form of a superior form, a deity, who can be very vindictive to unjust. This claim is valid among major Indian tribes, Sioux, Cherokees etc. Nicely written, correct words, nice imagery. Bravo CW.